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Planning Pages by Plot
Know where you're starting, you want the first page to immediately grab the
attention of your viewers. The best way to create interest is conflict. And it
is a perfect way for your main characters to meet. So with the above meeting,
we can set the following as the starting scene:
OPENING: Rain falling hard, a girl runs through the rain, a boy is standing
there, she doesn't notice and bumps into him, instant dislike.
Now we want to fine tune it a bit more. Why is the guy standing there? Why's
the girl running? Does changing the original idea of Guy hates Girl make a
more interesting story?
REVISION: Rain falling hard on a city street, a girl runs through the rain
quickly, caught in the sudden downpour and rather distracted, a boy is
standing there, she doesn't notice and bumps into him, the boy pulls her to
her feet and hands her an umbrella before leaving. The girl is bewildered. CUT
to Cover Page I
This way the girl now has a reason for not seeing the boy, the boy is now the
mysterious stranger, and the two main characters are introduced with a link
between them, the umbrella. For more on this, see Styles and Storyboards.
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